KingQadarDwon' | Poetry Vibe
KingQadarDwon'

PRO MEMBER

This poet practices good karma and posts comments 162500
contest winner 1
contest winner
lightness in the dark
Poetician

Site Rank

RUBY

  ruby
Total poems   326
Lifetime Views   141548
Total poems - 7 days   0
Total poems - 30 days   1
Total poems - 90 days   1
Total poems - 365 days   2
you need to login or register to leave a comment

Once upon the Mind

CATEGORY

life

Views: 395

 

I told her that I'll call her back in a few minutes

 picked up a book instead and read for a few hours

a closed chapter on our happily ever after,

our paragraphs were no longer filled with laughter.

I even read faster trying to make the situation fun

but when a person isn't grateful for your time and mind

the Suns of mental and spiritual intimacy no longer shines.

The civilization that we were building no longer rises

instead it is brought down to loveless ruins.

 

Qadar Dwon'

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

 

mrmelody7 says:

King beautiful write Brother Man some really nice meaningful stanza and of course your pic reflect somethin heavy on the mind being ungrateful the all powerful mind catches it all peace and happiness and hope the Big Easy aint hot as SC 95 still cookin wit that humidity feelin triple digits
Contest Winner  

2b2b2 says:

Superb Work my brother.....ONE

poems by this commentor


Contest Winner  

The Immortal Wize says:

Incredible piece of work my brother

poems by this commentor


 

LP45 says:

This was definitely an enjoyable read KQD. Love the visuals in your work. Thank you for sharing this.

poems by this commentor


Contest Winner  

Kingqadardwon' says:

I want to send a special thanks to each and every one of you. I'm beyond blessed to share a platform with the greatest generation of poets that have ever walked this earth! Think about that! Reflect on that. We are the greatest to ever do this thing called poetry. I love you all... Y'all have inspired and motivated me so much on my poetic journey. Without y'all there is no me.. Peace, love, light and blessings to each and every one of you...

login below

Forgot your username?