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Determination Bro

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It was once about inspirational flow,

Bro

Logical acts of teaching,

To maintain and grip the struggle of your thinking through the grasp of understanding different situations

Now it's about conflicts, cupidity, brutality, making it, taking it by all means if necessary,

Whenever and wherever

Repeatedly

The negative thinking developed into

Spoken words

Senseless meanings arouse the minds of the listeners

Starvation for vengeance, money, possession and attention

Led to the act of misbehavior

You tuned out the higher words of your

True Saviors

 

Consequences of misused motivation

led to the outcome of

Redirection and correction

You use to cope

With no hope,

Bro

You didn't notice the sink hole

Down below

Destructionists deceived you and viewed your eyes with the prettiest and nicest

Snow

You didn't say, "No",

Bro

It was truly naive

 

Strapped with hidden struggles

Grieve

You couldn't relieve

You didn't believe

The pain would leave

And

The grief would ease

 

Faith presented you with a chance

You now deliver with the greatest

Advance

Mama said, "your wisdom would grow."

Bro

You let the negativity go

And now you know

Your determination, Bro

You have your God-given soul

You're in control

You feel whole

You're pride to say, "You worked hard toward your goal."

You strived above difficulty

Bro

You knew your determination, creation and sensation, Bro

 

                Sabrina Williams.   

                          Chris

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Indyiansummer says:

This is an Excellent Write! I Loved It!

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The Immortal Wize says:

AWESOME! Love the confluent flow of energy.

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chris says:

Thank you very much.

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