mrmelody7
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life
Got this automatic pen
wants to keep on flowing ink
once it begins
No time for the mind to
think of rhyme
"The Pen" takes over
all the time
All this ink spewing down
tis how it is as if its it had
its own mind
Weather dark and cold outside
toasty warm inside as the heater
jumps on and off
for me atmosphere is everything
pen lets me know who is boss
Have to hit my hand to slow
it down
thats how it is when my Fall Winter
writing begin
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COMMENTS
LP45 says: Nice flow mrmelody. Great write. |
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2b2b2 says: Great piece mrmelody.....flows come and go...just like the seasons and our reasons....ONE |
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mrmelody7 says: 2b you Sir are the master technician always lots of time effort spent in your creations I can tell me just a M16 set on rock and roll Got TO CAP THAT LAST LINE thank U much |
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mrmelody7 says: AS always thank you LP45 for your always generous comments time go back next week dark early temps acting like they should Fire barrel time |
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Tali says: Mrmelody very nice capture, the season must be setting in for you, i'm excited to read more. |
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mrmelody7 says: Mz Sweet T the Lady with all that elegant pizzaz in her poetry reading you like watching an on stage play thank you much yeah gotta find somethin to do when stuck in the house |
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Tali says: Thank you mrmelody, I learn from watching seasoned poets such as yourself. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thanks for the compliment I beg to differ you were a unique young poet from the time I read your first poem its fascinating how one so young serving up such deep polished pizzaz creations |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY mrmelody7
Black Folks Endangered SpeciesNow that the Toxic Republicans again in control Black Folks rally around our new black Folks Anthem its on youtube its called Bop gun Endangered Species by Parliament 4 toxic years on the menu  |
Right OnIf U didnt take the time to go vote I dont wanna hear nothin U gotta say bout the economy about the racist hate about the wars about the high gas prices U got no complaints at all if you sit or sat back and say said it dont matter who win everything still b the same I dont wanna hear it no matter how tough things get mean while when the voting is over I go right back to livin the life Marvin Gaye sing about the song called Right On from the classic LP Whats Going On I am one of those who simply like to socialize those of us who enjoy ourselves Peace and You tube it |
Veterans DayVeterans Day soon will b here For my part Army Man raised the right hand repeat after me This I Will Defend For me it was an honor to say this Flag is our Flag This is our trophy u got to go thru somethin to talk about or attempt to take our Flag nuff said A solid salute ot all the Brothers and Sisters of all Branches and a special shout out to my Brothers and Sisters of the Vietnam War we shall never forget our treatment upon returning to the US of A Took a couple of generations of young Teachers who taught the kids the true meaning of Veterans Day for us to regain faith in America but my generation U shall never b forgiven We didnt ask to go U sent us so we went Kids fresh out of high school sent to fight someone in thei... |
Young Folks VoteYoung folks its your world get out there vote your right to choose If U dont its your world U bout to lose I am a Baby Boomer I have had my run now what kind of world U want for you its your turn Go out there and vote its a lot of weight one must carry on ones back show those who wanna demolish that terminology democracy you not slack u got your generation back U want your world back This young generation voice your vote Stand up young women young men sometimes its a heavy load U must tote Dont b sorry tomorrow cause u 2 lazy as the Mom would say tryfling to help make a difference in the world
A song from 1969 so revelant still today its by the Impression lead singer Curtis Mayfield the song is call check on... |
Lookin Really Pretty Out HereLookin really pretty out here In the midst of a changin season the landscape everywhere you look you cant escape it the Fall atmosphere got it lookin like tall beautiful flowers but of course its those changin color of leaves vivid colors from those enormous trees then there are the shorter ones to blend in like the rainbow in the sky Lookin real Pretty ou here
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Happy Birthday To UThere are many holidays throughout the year where we celebrate somethin but I have always had this Special Day I wouldnt say its a holiday but 4 me its a Very Special DAY October 24 just a bell ringer when I see it when I hear it when I know its close thats your Birhday Mom I know when it gets close cause mine is October 15 Always that runnin thing with U Mom you know what I always tell you that I was your birthday present Love you Mom forever U just physically gone spiritually soulfully U still here Forevr grateful blessed by God to have had you here over 97 and half years Happy Birthday MOM Youtube has this wonderful song called MOM its for you Mom Song by Earth Wind and Fire From their first album
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Heater JumpinThat atmospheric time fireplace sets it off cause the Hawk has come to nest and rest Heater jumpin on and off all night temp dipped to 37 But its somethin bout this time of year house is warm cold outside gettin darker earlier and earlier every day feelin that brisk Fall wind watchin leaves really leavin the trees Love the sound inside the house heater jumpin on and off make me grab a pen throw a lil art together my Muse kind of weather
This song is a favorite combative summer song by my favorite R and B Funk group Isley Brothers been dealin with them since the 60s got a lot of their music The Heat is On youtube gots it |
Straight From The Hip BafflerNot one who craves attention one that loves danger and adventure Got this best friend named shadow with me he always follow he is everywhere I go like me love to travel incognito Never out to impress just b me a mystifier a baffler beyond the realm of reality This one staight from the mind not written down on paper doing it real real straight off the computer keyboard At times do things like this so easily bored spur of the moment as I baffle
Feelin Blue Earth Wind N Fire Youtube |
Early Mornin Write3 or so in the mornin like every night for years now dealin with this PTSD eyes never shut tight Not much for watchin TV so I kinda just lay here hoping to catch a few winks before the night is over A restless Soul fighting to get a lil sleep if I get any its always light never deep Well this morning here maybe I will begin this trend of a early morning write
Music junkie since small child At the age of 12 I remember this song love the part about the milkman they really did used to deliver milk in the bottle with that fresh cream on top early in the morning The song was tossin and turnin Bobby Lewis youtube it
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Writing GrooveAint got into that comfortable Fall Winter mood to get into that easy going smooth rhythmic flow Its just the atmosphere aint quite right yet still kinda warm heater aint jumpin on and off leaves aint turned brown hitting the ground aint dark at 5 yet but Muse makes me sit down pick up that pen get it movin get on down with that writing groove
My favorite Rock group is the Rolling Stones I have two forty fives I bought in high school still have them one 45 was get off my clou the other no satisfaction by the Stones I sometimes have to tell Muse I Cant Get No Satisfaction Rolling Stones youtube got it |
