mrmelody7
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CATEGORY
life
Got this automatic pen
wants to keep on flowing ink
once it begins
No time for the mind to
think of rhyme
"The Pen" takes over
all the time
All this ink spewing down
tis how it is as if its it had
its own mind
Weather dark and cold outside
toasty warm inside as the heater
jumps on and off
for me atmosphere is everything
pen lets me know who is boss
Have to hit my hand to slow
it down
thats how it is when my Fall Winter
writing begin
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COMMENTS
LP45 says: Nice flow mrmelody. Great write. |
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2b2b2 says: Great piece mrmelody.....flows come and go...just like the seasons and our reasons....ONE |
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mrmelody7 says: 2b you Sir are the master technician always lots of time effort spent in your creations I can tell me just a M16 set on rock and roll Got TO CAP THAT LAST LINE thank U much |
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mrmelody7 says: AS always thank you LP45 for your always generous comments time go back next week dark early temps acting like they should Fire barrel time |
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Tali says: Mrmelody very nice capture, the season must be setting in for you, i'm excited to read more. |
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mrmelody7 says: Mz Sweet T the Lady with all that elegant pizzaz in her poetry reading you like watching an on stage play thank you much yeah gotta find somethin to do when stuck in the house |
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Tali says: Thank you mrmelody, I learn from watching seasoned poets such as yourself. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thanks for the compliment I beg to differ you were a unique young poet from the time I read your first poem its fascinating how one so young serving up such deep polished pizzaz creations |
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