The Immortal Wize

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Easy Does It

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one time I looked and I saw

some people spreading their

wings kicking and splashing

in the deep it looked like fun

so welcoming and easy to me

but when I jumped in water

touched my feet I started to

drown immediately suddenly it

came to me I could not swim

thinking to myself upon rescue

what was I thinking it was not

easy to do could have been

the last of you drowning

in that pool but I thought I

could do what I saw others

do without first learning how

to struggle before I could fly

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		2b2b2 says: Word poems by this commentor Uniqueness (Who's Who Haiku) URGE Watch your Handsâ€¦.
		LP45 says: Great write Wize! Powerful and thought provoking. Life lessons. Thank you for sharing this. poems by this commentor 4AM Reassurance Prosequence or Consequence?
		mlowe5 says: A great allegorical lesson indeed! We with more have yet to learn the lessons of achievement of our ancestors who had less to begin with. We're still leaping before looking. Peace and Love my Wize Brother, mlowe5 poems by this commentor SEESAWING THE LAW... OF THE SPIRIT THAT I AM Haiku 142

OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize

I'm The Blip (162025)

something is broken and I can't fix it and I can't get in touch with those who can but I can't give up on it I have to keep on working with it because it's worth all the energy I put into it when it was functioning at full capacity working as expected at a maximum level of productivity efficiently as possible without any limitations helping me to reach the highest possible level ofperformance as long as it comes on when I push the power button I can manage to get around the glitch when in pursuit to meet a goal I'm relentless resilient and determine to see it through to carry on to the next beat

Sky (162025)

when I see stars in the sky I think about all the things that dominate the sky but those things have no dominion over the sky nothing can touch a single cluster in the sky

"I wonder why "

Quick Witted

every time I hear someone say "it's the end of the world" I get excited not because I'm suicidal I get excited because I been hearing about this event for so long like we been lied to for so long I heard that "God don't make mistakes" I mean if God made mistakes God would have to erase us off the face of Earth so be it and it shall be done and all that bible talk I'm at the point of my life where it's do or die I'm gone do all I can before I die or God decide to wipe us out

Concoction

they told us what happened they showed us what happened now their trying to convince us it happened the current event is not new development the evidence is irrelevant ain't nothing to see here other than a elephant jump over the fence and a cow jump over the moon

Broken People Do Great Things (142025)

The "broken crayon theory" is a metaphor that unlocks and opens a door to many more a broken hammer can still drive a nail a suitcase with a broken handle can still be carried a broken heart still beats like a drum a broken pencil still can be sharpened like a broken crayon still colors there's no deeper place than a wounded place where scars are born and cannot be erased like the tears we wipe away so we can say "I'm not crying" but sometimes the tracks give us away functioning through dysfunction is everyday life for some more than likely for most one can be split into pieces but still manage to exist applied pressure is what breaks us it's the SNAP! that wakes us UP!

That Away (142025)

sometimes I feel as though I'm heading in the wrong direction I could turn around but curious about where it will lead me when I get there I find out I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be, going the wrong way to get there is what lead me here it feel that way sometime

The Third Stage (142025)

in nineteen eighty, twenty twenty five seemed to be far away now that I've arrived it seems like it didn't take that long or did I unintentionally doze off during the ride

The Devil Is A Couch Potato (142025)

we gotta stop blaming the devil for everything "the devil is not busy" I know the devil personally and the devil is a lazy bum the only one's working is the minions the devil got millions but ain't got dominion the church would disagree with me and I have no inkling why that would be religious belief is only an opinion regardless of what we believe we gotta stop giving credit and energy to the enemy okay let's say the trick is to not believe it exists to believe or not to believe what is the difference if we all going to hell in a hand basket who's the carrier service

High Beams

I can't see across the street I can't see the tree in front of me on the inside looking outside something falling from the sky it looks like rain but it ain't I hear roaring thunder but I can't see lightening strike no stars no moon tonight can't help but feel the cover up is real in a realm of illusion can't jump to conclusions cancel the resolution time to work be on high alert can't believe it all hard to conceive it all happening all at once how can one not be confused can't trust all the news hands up if you got the blues just because there's no particular reason one can think of because the evidence isn't strong enough to convince us regardless of the sacrifice this world still want our blood

We'll See

who knows when no one's talking about what needs to be known who knows when no one knows what's going on except the ones who know who told no one about the secret kept hidden and swept underneath the throw rug covering up the hole leading to who knows what how and where