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underwater

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 lying sweetly, six feet, underwater
ever, the wayward daughter
waiting, watching, the surface above
amazed by, things done, in the, name of love
.
tell me, what eles can I do
If i drown here for you
would, you be satisfied
would you, drink the tears I’ve cried
to qwench your thirst
.
aged face, childs mind
In your head, so sweet and kind
but, your hands love to destroy
you, treat a child like a toy
.
How can I, measure up
how can, I ever be enough
when I’m, the last in your rank
the lost ship, that sank
.
If I, dove into the waves
I could, break free of this haze
but, you’ve got to stong a hold
I love you till I’m old
and, gray
but, I’ll hate you every single day

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love_supreme says:

Wow, I am surprised that this poem did not get a lot of comments.

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