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BrownchildT

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Standing in a room 
full of people 
I still feel alone..

Staring at familiar faces
That I really don’t know 
Smiling in my face are my enemies.

The distance between 
My sisters and me has made them 
Strangers to me.

Won’t stimulate my mind
Will profess that I’m pretty
never noticed empty words 
Don’t fill me..
™BrownChild

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mrmelody7 says:

Being detached not a bad thing keep your focus on the path you choose life is about decisions always be yourself your poetry says you are noticed
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The Immortal Wize says:

✨Vibezzzzz
 

Brownchildt says:

That means Something to me thank you mrmelody7

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Brownchildt says:

The poet wize thank you
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Kewayne Wadley says:

Niccee!! I often feel the same way, spoke on so many levels KW

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Brownchildt says:

Thank you Kewayne Wadley
 

love_supreme says:

Loved this one! Excellent write.

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LP45 says:

Great write BrownchildT. I can definitely relate to this on several different occasions throughout my life. Nevertheless, feeling alone in a "room full of strangers" may just simply be your time to stand out. There's a saying that if you want to fit in, stand out. I don't know who wrote it, but it's amazing how few words have such a big impact on our daily lives. Keep writing and keep standing out! Thank you for sharing.
 

Brownchildt says:

Thank you latin_lover

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Brownchildt says:

Ladypoet45 Thank you for reading my piece.

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RonnieL says:

Man...feel this scribe. Most times feel the same way. Eye stay in my own lane most times.

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Brownchildt says:

Thank you RonnieL Me too, I stay in my own lane..

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mlowe5 says:

Most inspiring Brownchildt! After reading this pen 3 times, it suddenly revealed to me that often,when we fill detached in a crowd, we are really being given an insight into how we all can still be together and be our selves in making up one family of love. You know, like a detached row of houses making up a well bonded community i.e., individual poets sharing a common purpose. Thanks for sharing this write. Keep being you...writing the truths revealed unto you that we may all grow together. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Brownchildt says:

mlowe5 thank you for taking time to read my piece

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