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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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you have to get your foot in the door

before it closes even if it hurts

take the first step the door will

get tired of trying to close on you

then it will open letting you in

once inside you will find a chair

with a bell on the floor beside it

take a seat in the chair pick up

the bell and ring it three times

the charm is in a cunning and

baffling way you're trapped into

where you wanted to be with no

idea of what's coming because

the door looked so appealing

the bell keeps on ringing long

after you have sat it down you

continually hear the sound of

someone coming you can get

up and run for the door but the

doors broken and wont open

you can sit there and start praying

hoping it's not as bad as it sounds

hoping it's a dream not as bad as

it seems from the inside wanting

to go outside where you were

but you're stuck behind the walls

and that bell wont stop its ringing

you're tired of sitting and waiting

for what's coming so you get up

and start running around the room

in a fit of madness in sheer panic

then the bell stops ringing the

door opens and you hear singing

free to go back to where you

were before you knocked on

the door to see what was on

the other side of your mind

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mlowe5 says:

Nice! Seek and ye shall find "...the other side of you mind" and realize that the truth---you already had. Enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing, mlowe5

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