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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Patio Party

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you're a star in my eyes

not one on TV or seen

on TMZ I 'm speaking of

galaxies as far as I can

see coming into view

if I could just get one

step closer to you I'd

fall in love I've always

dreamed of falling in

love so many times I

thought I did fall in love

that is what was I thinking

that's why I quit drinking

by the time I got sober

the relationship was over

I was ten when I started

taking swigs from glasses

left on the table after the

party was over woke up

with a hangover took 12

steps and fell over it was

a process but life did

get better in time I healed

now that I'm well I hope for

something real to hang

on to if this is a match I

know we'll go through

changes in our new

arrangement coz of both

our issues no ones

perfect I think you're worth

it that's why I'm nervous

stammering trying not to

sound foolish trying to get

with you at this strange hour

your light is so bright can't tell

day from night it's like the

suns setting the moon on fire

that's not me talking that's

desire expressing feelings

in it's deepest frequency

 

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Deep pen! What a patio! Peace and Love, mlowe5

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