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Will We Let It Be?

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Will We Let It Be?

Will the flow of our vibe 

depend on how the world

 has treated you?

Will yesterday’s wound be a reason 

to escape all I’m willing to

Share with you?

At home will you be

the source of our temperamental stability,

Or the root of our dismay the reason

our joy is stolen away?

Will one day We Two 

see in each other’s eyes not Love but,

instead strangers We Two have become?

For the sake of the children 

We Two together passed on to them..

Daddy’s temper, his pride, his brown eyes..

Inherited mommy’s way to carry burdens 

With their head held high..

Will We Let It Be?

This world, old wounds, Our pain

why OUR chance at Love, to be Loved

be in vain OR can We Two teach

OUR babies a New Way?

Learn to push pass 

the pain and Love All 

that We Are anyway..

™BrownChild

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Wonderful futurelistic write and questions to ponder you always show a savvy sound judgement in your creations
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The Immortal Wize says:

💯Standing Ovation! 💥NAMASTE!
 

Brownchildt says:

mrmelody7 thank you Im glad you like it..
 

Brownchildt says:

Thae Poet Wize Thank you

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Poetic08' says:

Your work is forming into a diamond piece, keep bring it Queen, it your soul.

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Brownchildt says:

Thank you
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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