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love_supreme
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lightness in the dark
We will make it through this. Believe that.

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Swimming

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My mind has been swimming lately.

Not like swimming in a pool - but this is more like the ocean

Where the waves are so high that I cannot see the one behind it

People, waves of people and responsibilities

One of those long words that they force you to add to memory

When it is a memory they would rather soon forget

Their actions are strong and mind filled with regrets

Not greatly for anything, not my feet above the earth

Not the capacity to breathe deep, strong, and hard

I am running rough-shod through life

with no respect and many regrets

So maybe I have become truely responsible.

I wish they would take it easy on me though

or better yet, I would take it easier on myself.
 

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blackflag2601 says:

What I took from your poem is the importance of being 'here'. Very good job.

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DeleDivine says:

Swimming through the treachorous waves of life makes us stronger. This is so strong, so deep and a nice haiku twist. You go!!.:)
 

love_supreme says:

Thank you. I try to remain in the here and now and enjoy whats in front of me.

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DeleDivine says:

You're welcome.. You're definitely showing it. Keep it coming.:)

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