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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I seen you when you fell apart
picking up the pieces took lots
of heart weathering the storm
tore the wind apart stomped
your foot fire ran the other way
still water never had chance
earth never been the same
you even took the taste out
of salt something happened
in your fall what did you see
down there that made you
  rise up and bend steal
did you transmute into iron
what altered your mind into
thinking you could conquer
the world with one hand tied
behind your back you fell I
heard a crack when you
crashed wrote you off as
being gone but you came
back the force was with you

 

 

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