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JG Collins
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Ladypoet45

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Darkness

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Full white
moon. 

Star ceiling.

Fire roaring.

Flames soaring,
Sparks flying
high,
high into
the night.
Chanting 
loudly. 
Baleful voices
sounds
echoing off
the stones.
Drums beating.
Faces painted.
Wild dance,
arms raised.
Looking
 on high.
Superstitions
born!
Wild night, 
sacrifice delivered.
Appeasements,
prayers made.
Moonlight,
shadows thrown,
seeing ghosts.
Ghosts dancing,
flying
in the glades.
The world, 
a frightful
place 
so very
long ago.

 

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COMMENTS

 

LP45 says:

Excellent imagery and flow JG. Keep em coming.

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JG Collins says:

Hi LP, Thank you kindly. J

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JG Collins says:

Hi LP, Thank you kindly. JG

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mlowe5 says:

JG, thank you for sharing this beautiful message wrap in such allegorical imagery and rhythmic. Indeed, the dark of darkness there is light! And so we begin; continue on my brother. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

JG Collins says:

Thank you kindly for reading my work

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