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lightness in the dark

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romance

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I besought Oshun to loose the riverbanks last night, 

She allowed the clouds to swell, 

There's been 43 crescent moons & rising suns since I've plucked the fragments of my face out of our Garden of love.

Only to realize, that after meticulous tilling of the ground, the soil was barren, 

I pray she rains on you, until I'm satisfied.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Sounds like someone needs to learn to respect the power of love or else invest in rain gear. 🔥🔥🔥

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love_supreme says:

Wow this is nice! Excellent write.

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2b2b2 says:

Butter Writes....Don't play with Mother Nature....indeed...thanks for sharing!!
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Coalhouse says:

great work of art, get down!

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