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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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 they say you gone I say "YOU FREE"

 they say you dead I say "YOU FREE"

 they say they miss you, they want you back

 "I say "YOU FREE" they say you died
an untimely death I say "YOU FREE"

 they cry coz you gone I shed tears
coz  I'm still here watching candles burn
and go out watching  floating balloons

watching
dirty teddy bears propped up against
fences standing outside watching
flowers die and people crying all the time

watching
 crosses stuck in the mud reading RIP
written on a shirt reading name scrawled
 on  the walls listening to anger scream

 listening to brothers squeeze off watching
the life of the living paying the cost of being
                
                "I SAY YOU FREE"
 

 

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EmpressRee says:

Yes! Our perception is everything. By all this mourning we are holding them captive. They have reached the true stage of freedom!
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mlowe5 says:

Yes! Let us not make an irony out of the inevitability of freedom in death; rather, let us praise the spirit of the dead for their struggle to bring and share freedom while living. Thanks for sharing this important message. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

prettyface2 says:

That was deep!

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LP45 says:

Powerful piece Poet Wze. Thank you for sharing.
 

Flora$$$ghostw12 says:

sad sad and sad. Brilliant. I feel sad about Cadet

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