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Mind Had This Idea

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Mind had this Idea I am top

dog round here I call the shots

this was the mind mind had in mind

Takes a while before reality takes hold

by the then unknowing mind that

mind was never in control

Mind always sayin gonna do this now

gonna do that later

Finally Body been tellin Mind

in subtle ways you cant do this kinda

stuff no more but in the back of Minds mind

he saying what do he know

Body steps dead out front

you aint doing this now and you

aint doing that later

I am the one you cater

Body done shut down you

cant get around

you got pains here

you got pains there

Mind stil runnin that mouth

I will do it when I get better

Body responds yo man

you laid up Brother

forget your style

gonna be a while

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LP45 says:

Yes how true this is as we get older! I can soooo relate to this on a lot of levels, LOL. Thanks for sharing this reality of time.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thamk you much as my elderly aunt used to tell me just keep living and all thats in it
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thanks they had a problem with internet explorer switched to chrome when I got another computer went with firefox may go back to chrome you lucky I never seen um again did it last nite I decided not to ven do it again happen several times in the last month gotta do some scouting

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gmcgee325 says:

I laughed my way through this entire piece... Your exchange between mind and body is so dead on...very creative 🔥

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mlowe5 says:

Hey Bro! Enjoyed this read. Seems your mind been hanging out with mine. My old aunt use to say to me, "Just keep saying good morning; and you'll see!" Oh man, this morning! Thanks for sharing, Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

mrmelody7 says:

Mz gmc appreciate all your reads and generous comments the back is really good at talkin to you
 

mrmelody7 says:

Lol those wise ancestorss had some sayins

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