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Time Stands Still

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In complete silence

I hear the clock tick 

The wind blow

As tears flow from my eyes

Like raindrops in the spring time

When yesterday things were fine

Today I need to unwind

While my emotions continue to fly

And leave my soul

My better half is gone

Tick tock

There goes the clock last tick

To the curb I've been kicked

And time stands still

Til the flame of the fire goes flick

The hands turn back

Letting me retrace my track

Before the wind blow

Before my emotions fly

Before I began to cry

Before time stood still

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mrmelody7 says:

Enjoyed from beginnin to end its like live poetry enjoy the sounds (wind clock rain) enjoyed the scenic imagery not to worry when that special fella come along Time will again get to spinnin and movin U are very good at your craft
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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gmcgee325 says:

Thank you both for the love it's really appreciated❤️

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