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gmcgee325
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Can I Go

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Can I go with you

On this imaginary ride

Where our pens glide

And our words collide

I'm ready to relax my mind

And let our vibes intertwine

So go ahead and educate

I love when you stimulate

My senses

Did I mention

It is my every intention

To put you under my spell

Can't you tell

The way the rhyme of my words

Pound against the drum in your mind

Have you thinking Damn I can't wait till our flows combine

You have moved me creatively

Now I want to share my expressive way of being

You don't have to be left alone with your pen

Because I'm asking you

Can I go with you

I really want to

Go with you on this journey through your notebook

Let me take a look

At where your mind travels

To a place where true passion exist

Let me taste your potion

So that I can experience the motion 

Of your brain waves

So tell me

Can I go with you

I really want to

I do ❤️

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mrmelody7 says:

Rhythm of the pen u do so well with your very expressive flow enjoy your creative expressions BTW have you ever heard going to a go go by Smokey Robinson and the miracles
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gmcgee325 says:

Thank you mrmelody7 and no I haven't but I am going to ❤️
 

Belindathapoet says:

YES!! I REALLY Like the Flow and Rhythm of this poem!!!

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