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life 1 min read 601 views Feb 10, 2019

Black Bird Blues

 

Sitting down here

with a stick,

scribbling in the sand,

I looked up

into a space in the sky

and there it was—a bird

looking down on me

and all this mess:

(blatant political atrocities);

 

Lazily hanging there in the air,

I swear—and no lie—it seemed

to wink an eye as it drifted down

and began to peck in all this mess:

(bigotry, racism, injustice, poverty, war);

 

Then it nonchalantly returned

to the heavenly sky—hovered momentarily

and then took off towards new horizons;

leaving me down here in all this mess:

(gender bias, anti-this, anti-that);

 

I won’t lie; sometimes I wish I could fly

away from it all; but that’s not my call;

I know why I’m here on this quest—

down here in all this mess:  (to clean it up!)

 

Yes, I’m just a bird of another feather;

down here with my sisters and brothers—

all working together—trying to make it better:

blessed to soar onward in all this messy weather.

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mrmelody7

Such a picturesque scene and great story in between them birds flying so high (I love to watch the Vultures beautiful flight these human buzzards tryin to divide the races Warriors like yourself see the big picture

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gmcgee325

I love this... Such a vivid description I believe you saw what you say you saw❤️

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mlowe5

gmcgee325, thanks for journeying with me in capturing this allegorical, surreal experience. Your read and time taken to send feedback are both much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5

mrmelody7, as always, it such a joy and confirmation to receive your feedback which always seems to show a strong shared conscienousness of kind. Peace and Love, Sir, mlowe5

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LP45

Every time I read one of your works, I feel like I'm opening a book and turning the pages. Your imagery is nothing short of amazing. Thank you for this wonderful read mlowe5. Peace and blessings.

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mlowe5

Thank you, my Sister. Just some more of the inspiration I get from your poetic lessons o imagering truths. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5

Many thanks, love_supreme. I am always honored and humbled to have your frequent visit to my poetic nest . You always leave me motivated, inspired, and energized in my poetic mission purpose. Peace and Love.

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