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A Haiku Perspective in Five Movements

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Hey!  Save the children!

It’s all about the children—

Heirs are what we were.

 

Thus lays victory…

Freeing their mind frees us all:

Heirs are what we were.

 

Rough stones are waiting,

Let’s get busy polishing…

Heirs are what we were.

 

Time to teach the truth;

The All-Seeing Eye shinning:

Heirs are what we were.

 

            The children are lost…

            They need footprints to follow:

            What will our heirs be?

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gmcgee325 says:

Bravo! Very deep and inspiring! ❤️
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, gmcgee325. This was inspired after spending a day with 3 young children who we have added to the extended family as our great-grandchildren! They now call us PaPa and Nanna! Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Tali says:

Beautiful masterpiece, the children are heirs to an ancient throne. Congratulations on your new additions.
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mlowe5 says:

Tali_sosweet, much thanks for your support. Your comments are most appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

LP45 says:

Love these words of truth mlowe5. Children are indeed the keys to the future. Thank you for sharing this.

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mlowe5 says:

Peace and Love to you, Ladypoet45. Thanks for the read and feedback. Your support continues to be motivating. mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, love_supreme! You know where I'm coming from. Peace and Love.

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