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takiyahalee
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Wow this ish just got deep! Who knew poets beefed? Well I guess I'm that Heifer, go ahead and send me to slaughter make me a martyr, I'll just reincarnate and come back as your daughter, and go hard because this here page is my new yard. Yeah I'm new, but who are you to test my real? How the hell you claim I don't feel? Is it because I choose simplicity over intricacy? MotherGoose got a book deal didn't she?
I mean no harm and have the utmost respect for those who pioneered and are worthy of the phrase Vets, but your criticism does not validate or intimidate me by far...My Flow and Talent need not to be like yours! You think you set the Bar? your bubble just got burst, this is my universe and i create the stars!
So what I'm green to written expression, I welcome your disection...I'll print my ish out and give you a red pen and let you get to checkin, pick apart my rhymes section by section...I'll analyze take in the lesson and spit it back at you with the corrections, now you soft...lost that errection cause without Hesitation, you did what was expected...You gave a New Comer like me Motivation!

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j.king337 says:

Respect
 

takiyahalee says:

Thank you

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jojo says:

so. don't let it bother you. opinions are life s, evebody has one. Just don't let it affect you. You're to cute to be bitter.

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