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Julius170
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What you want to know I like you, I feel like we would vibe together, Maybe that’s just me, What Can I say, I’m a mix kid, Who made it out the hood, I’m just trying to do something with my life, So I decided to go to college, I wanna become a detective in homicide, I also wanna be a math teacher, So idk, Back to being a mix kid, I’m Puerto Rican and Africa America, I’m 5’8, Living everyday with a smile on my face, I hope that’s good enough, I’m a deep soul, You will soon realize, I can keep going but I’ll give you a break.

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The world is against me

So I close my eyes

And run away

 

The world is against me

I'm just trying to live this life

 

Called the game

With my controller in my hand

 

I'm trying to control my own destiny

Who going to tell me other wise

 

The world is against me

So I stop and raise my hands 

You haven’t caught me with anything

 

All I really need is me

Fighting this selfish battle

I can only beat me

 

This is a tough world

Living in Survival mode 

 

I try to sleep 

Sleep away the pain

 

I felt like nobody understand

I felt like I was the only one

 

Living in survival mode

Me against the world

 

You know what 

I’m 23

Unstoppable 

Highly motivated 

What are you 

Gonna do

To stop me 

From leveling up 

 

I’m gonna keep pushing

Do what 

I gotta do

To be successful

 

The world is against me,

But what’s your position,

Only motivators and supporters

Are wanted over here

 

Only giving out applications

Not everyone is welcome

Welcome in my life

 

My time is valuable

 I’m not giving you the free will

Free will to waste my time

Get the *** outta here

 

 

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COMMENTS

 

LP45 says:

Nice work Julius. Keep writing.

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Elvan says:

Interesting perspective on life and acquiring the possibility of leveling up without wasting your time. Viewing those around you with suspect motives. and realizing success comes with assistance of other that may very well waste your time. Your best filtering can find you standing alone. Good delivery

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