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Ripples In Time...

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life

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Ripples In Time…

 

Chipped off

the rock of the time

a human pebble pierces

the soft water of life’s dreams

 

Ripples of hope

spread across the pond

of blurred reality—

ripples bouncing

and dissipating—

curved banks confining

efforts of freedom

 

In the dying sunlight

of escape

we’ve become

like human truffles

hiding beneath the floor

of mother earth

 

In the dimming twilight

humanoid jackals roam—

slaughtering at will:

 

At the crossroads

of change

fading ripples

await the coming freeze.

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LP45 says:

Mlowe5, love the wordplay in this write. You have such vibrant imagery in that ink of yours! Thank you for sharing.
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, Ladypoet45. Just know that you have taught me a lot about wordplay. You continue to be an inspiration. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Charles2 says:

Reading ...into the depths of the changing dimensions ...moving...

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mlowe5 says:

Many thanks Charles 2. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, love_supreme. Thanks. Peace and Love.

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