"Lost in gaze"
I saw a beautiful lady,
just one gaze and I was lost in
thoughts.
She is certainly an angel,
A damsel with hidden wings,
Her beauty is a virus and feeds on watchful eyes, her vibrant smile is a cure for saddened hearts,
Just one gaze and she enslaved me,
But no slavery seems this good.
She is surely the one this time I thought.
But when I got to know her I wondered why I concluded with just a gaze,
She was nothing my mind had proposed to me.
Next time, when I meet a damsel as beautiful as her I won't conclude with just a gaze but certainly two! Hmmm
By iscomart
Iscomart
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Lost in gaze
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LP45 says: Beauty is in the eye of the beholder as much as looks can be deceiving. Wise write Iscomart. Always look inside first for true beauty. Thank you for sharing this and welcome to the vibe! Keep writing. |
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Iscomart says: thank you very much Ladypoet45 for taking your time to read it, am glad you liked it. |
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Iscomart says: thank you very much Ladypoet45 for taking your time to read it, am glad you liked it. |
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Elvan says: Nicely delivered, with love you it is not often; what you see is what you get. The whole package comes with opposite experiences so when the smoke clears you see the entire person beneath the facade of beauty. I like the presentation. |
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mlowe5 says: Iscomart, I love the word play in imaging a powerful message! Indeed, true beautiy is seen with the mind's eye, conveying it to the heart's discernment. Great write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Iscomart says: mlowe5 thank you for taking your time to read my write up I am honoured |
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Iscomart says: emcintyr1981@yahoo.com I am glad you love my write up, I am honoured |
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Charles2 says: Great day ...for writing poetry. like this. beautiful ...thoughts... realities, another matter. I see the others have weighed in first. i tend to be a bit more cautious. i like your work. you seem pretty advanced in understanding your way around words. i like to space my words around a bit... maybe discrete thoughts ....leave out middle words... have fun |
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Iscomart says: Thanks Charles2 am am glad you liked it! |
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Lost in gaze"Lost in gaze" I saw a beautiful lady, just one gaze and I was lost in thoughts. She is certainly an angel, A damsel with hidden wings, Her beauty is a virus and feeds on watchful eyes, her vibrant smile is a cure for saddened hearts, Just one gaze and she enslaved me, But no slavery seems this good. She is surely the one this time I thought. But when I got to know her I wondered why I concluded with just a gaze, She was nothing my mind had proposed to me. Next time, when I meet a damsel as beautiful as her I won't conclude with just a gaze but certainly two! Hmmm By iscomart  |
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