looking for some one to save you
may not get you saved
the one you're looking to
may be digging your grave
there's nothing much to learn
by being alive except people
live and they die
there's a train that keeps
passing by and one day
you'll be inside
farfetched deeply deceived
not sure if there ever was an Eve
knowing there's day there's night
there's sun coz it's bright
there's a moon coz there's light
there's a star coz it's night
the truth don't have to be right
don't reel it in coz there's no bite
keep fishing one day they might
pain is not necessarily onto death
do something with every breath
that's left if one sleeps then
one slept waking up is a concept
The Immortal Wize
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mlowe5 says: Sweet! Thanks for sharing this pillar of profound thought. Time to wake up! Enjoyed the read. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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