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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Out The Bag

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you told me to keep
your secret
you told me
to tell no one
you told me I
 was the only one
now someone knows
what you exposed
that someone is not
only me
someone knows
what's inside
exposing
the other side of you
stop looking at me
 I kept it secretly
looks like you didn't
tell only me
looks like you've been
talking to someone else
stop looking at me
that someone is not me
like a true friend
I kept in like water
as if I was under a
gag order I would have
never told a soul
about the bag 
you told me to hold

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Elvan says:

This piece to me speaks of promises broken and the disbelief that accompanies it. Nice presentation Poet Wize

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