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minayaJ
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Ignored

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The times Ive been ignored

 Lost count I wanna pull the cord

When love ones dont make you feel adored

Im lower than the floor

Why do I stick around if Im not an award

Though my feelings need to be restored

Happiness especially needed from the Lord

God help me surpass this pain

As words weigh me down like a bolted chain

In my brain Ive never fix this tainted stain

Where my heart bleeds every word I try to explain

But how... Since Im always ignored

Every chance I speak it needs to put on a billboard

So I can get noticed like a high score

Im always ignored

To the point that my heart is sore

Those aware of my pain invite me to war

Even if I have the mightiest sword I lose this battle like a closed door

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Elvan says:

I can feel the loneliness in your words MinayaJ; unfortunately silence also invites pain as well as the feeling of not being a part even though you are present. Well delivered piece.
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Charles2 says:

acute awareness ...of the pain you mirror, which resonates in me ...your words ring true to course ...as having a high standard of expectation ...of reciprocality... provides the tension which delivers ...and sets the tone. nice work!
 

minayaJ says:

thank you emintyr1982, if you only knew the pieces that need delivering

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minayaJ says:

Charles2, thank you ol wise one. your words are embraced.

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