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Stepping ...stones

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life

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Since creation...

Dispersed bands of...

The precursors

of all human creatures

Struggled… Against all odds

For survival ...as nature...

Dealt a cruel hand…To early mankind... 

Predators …were many… 

A bear would come …all would flee… 

If someone tried to save them

…they would

…most likely die…

Before ...more numerous bands

Of hue men beings …learned to

combine their skills

Organize ...their hunts to better the odds

To make more kills  to better defend... 

The meek, the weak …the young and old

The tribal group... which had to learn

to Continuously improvise… and in the process

Planting seeds of knowledge …handed down… 

To successive generations …making progress 

Easier …to discover, sharing visions…

Each …a step, up…

Towards becoming wiser

The next time ...the bear would come… 

Rather than flee, they would assemble the brave

Who would …become the fighters… 

 

 

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LP45 says:

Great write Charles2, Excellent wordplay and imagery. Dig the flow. A very descriptive view of life and survival. Thanks for sharing this.

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mlowe5 says:

A beautiful flowing history lesson filled with a mosaic of images of man/wombman in evolution...leaving footprints in the mud and echoing voices in stone. Enjoyed. thanks for sharing. Peace and Love...Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Charles2 says:

Two of my favorite artistic souls, speaking in visions of living soular spirits... it is a great honor that you review my humble offerings. Trying to get this storytelling thing ...down...

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Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings. Awesome! If only we would/could band together now and be warriors...We Would Be Unstoppable...Respect
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Charles2 says:

We have, we do, we are... and we will, continue... no doubt...

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