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BeeBelle
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We built this home on lies, you with your commitment, me with my insecurities we're both obsolete, why the roof is falling in.  Wondering why you can't commit; you say that thorns in your soul and that's why you can't close the window on us. Have you wondering when the air is clear is his stroke a little bit better. Does he hit my spot any better? My insecurities have me wondering is her ocean a little bit wetter, do she grip the sheets a little better. We lay in this bed, you in Asia, me in Africa while the floorboards flood. Where were you last night, no wonder you can't commit, you're too busy with dancers. I'll entertain my insecurities with Jim and Slim to keep from crying, while you love diamonds and roses. The foundation cracked. We built this home on lies, truth be told it was never a home but just a house, just an empty place for our hearts to occupy. You with your commitment, me with my insecurities we're both obsolete, we should be together. 

 

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Charles2 says:

Wow... deep trip through the woods in this story...

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