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Slave ...ship(you can be the star)

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Subjected to… the seventh, HELL…

A Deathstar guided cruise ship …bearing passengers 

Against their will …to another world …in time

Proud minds… stacked …in stench, so bad

Bodies rank, food and water stank

The dead …lay in the festering heat

Air so thick …with cries of concern

Hate that burned, menstrual cycle rot... 

without water to bathe... 

 

What hath God wrought? 

 

…and what …in the HELL

Did these people know

…of JESUS

A distorted view …no, less…

Selective,

whose attention… they caught

Broken

souls …seeking deliverance

From

the …hopelessness

Only …a chosen …few

Whose

will was broken  

Were

given passage to…

The

BIG house…

The openly defiant

Used

perhaps, for breeding

Killed,

as examples…

when needed

Defective cargo 

 

…spoils the bunch…

 

(FLASH FORWARD) 

 

Instead

…of whips and chains

…microchips…

to ejaculate your brain…

If that’s not enough

…or if you resist

They’ll double

…then triple dose you…

Make you

go insane…

Psychologically …whipped

…and double dipped…  

With the latest

psycho+analized

suicide pills

Macho thrills 

 

…on a personal tip… 

 

Pharmapseudological

thrills…

To supersize your EGO…

And emasculate

…your will

 

Till you

no longer seek JESUS 

 

They’ll convince you

…for a few dollars more… 

 

Thirty pieces …to be exact… 

 

Get you ...to sell your very SOUL... 

 

yes …you too, can be JESUS...  

 

In the electric chair

(high tech, no less) 

 

...you WILL fry... 

 

it'll only hurt a minute... 

 

but the pain and misery 

 

of your worthless existence 

 

will be over ...and... 

 

...you WILL DIE... 

 

And they will scrape

your burnt out remains 

...lay them ...to the side... 

 

 good bye...

 

 

C2 

 

 

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Tali says:

Amazing write! Great perspective!

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Charles2 says:

Hard to imagine ...the scene ...the hell... survival, through it

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