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Depression p2

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I just wanna let these tears fall but i gotta stay strong Im at my weakest but i gotta hold on some days i just wanna lay down and never get up But i refuse to show this part of me no matter what Im a artist i paint a smile on my face like a clown at circus it's never out of place. Im a actor i convince everyone with my laughter But deep inside my mind im stressin Its a 24 hour job hiding depression

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minayaJ says:

You are not alone. Good job.

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LP45 says:

MinayaJ is correct. You're not alone. At time when we believe we're at our weakest and we manage to hang on no matter what, that's when our strength comes in to play. This IS YOUR STRENGTH. God never gives us more than we can handle. Maybe perhaps He's using your strength to show someone else how to be strong like you. Keep your head up, keep writing and thank you for sharing this. Peace and God bless.
 

Tali says:

I’m echoing you are not alone... keeep writing! The expression in both poems are raw and honest.

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