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can you see us?

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romance

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Can you see us?

Courting?

I'm escorting you.

To a perfect view of the moon, from the window of my bedroom.

You.

Got to see us.

Making love after fighting.

Later.

Excitedly showing that we're sorry.

I beg you to see us.

Holding hands in the park.

Star gazing at the lake, after dark.

I can honestly see us.

Sundays, meditating.

Patiently awaiting.

For our hearts to unveil our souls,

Passionately mating.

Forget seeing.

Can you feel us?

Telepathically, we know trust.

After subconsciously being thrust past lust.

Infatuation, doesn't know us.

Answer this question.

Can you see us?

Climbing the stairs of commitment.

For, we whole heartedly know that we're different.

Enemies can't steer us.

Lonely hearts envy.

Haters stomachs empty, but we're full.

Love fills us.

Overflowing our once empty voids

Now we ride the tides of a billion joyful tear drops.

It's ok

Open your eyes.

Can you see us?

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COMMENTS

 

love_supreme says:

Wow, this was a very good poem.

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rare says:

Th:)nk you
 

paper_feelings says:

Awesome ri ri....
 

Assasin-O says:

Very nice!

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