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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Frontier of Tears

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I'm walking but I can't cross the line I'm getting near but I can't cross the line I see the mountain but I can't cross the line I see the lights but I can't cross the line I see the waterfall but I can't cross the line I see the shore but I can't cross the line the journey's been long but I can't cross the line I see the sanctuary but I can't cross the line I see the turn but I can't cross line I see the fire but I can't cross the line I see the exit sign but I can't cross the line it's almost time but I can't cross the line walls are closing in but I can't cross the line freedoms up ahead but I can't cross the line I see the promise land but I can't cross the line I see up the road but I can't cross the line I see the rainbow and the a pot of gold I see the tree's from the seed sown but I can't cross the line I see a new day I see new hope new life I see a better way I see over the wall but I can't cross the line I see Lady Liberty but I can't cross the line I hear bells ringing but I can't cross the line I see the angels waiting for me but I can't cross the line to get to the other side

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mlowe5 says:

I see what you are saying PoetWize. I hear what you are saying that you can't do. Wisdom dwells in the deepest depth of contemplation. Spend some time there and listen to all it is that you can do. Free your mind and you are...crossing over the blindness of the deceitful line draeing its self in the sand of the mind---that pregnant poetic mind! Thanks for this share, Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Brownchildt says:

That’s how you know you have grown-up. When you decide and choose not to cross the line. I like this. Great piece.

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