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Anticipation

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damage control

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life

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hurtling along... 

like an arrow ...through the air... 

free of the earth bound restrictions 

skimming above the waves 

seemingly wihout a care... 

 

 

 

 

 

hull breach... 

the hull of the vessel 

torn... 

ripped like ripe flesh 

impaled upon a thorn... 

too late to deflect 

no time to even collect thoughts

reaction time

now

 

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mlowe5 says:

Yes...even in the free flow of it all, collateral damage seems to seep in demanding "...reaction" tiime. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love,mlowe5

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Charles2 says:

Thank you, mlowe5... accidental

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