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The drumbeat of rhythmic thunder
echoing,
filling empty spaces of the sky

as trees dance to the stormy winds
and baritone sounds of rain
tapping with strange tranquility

In the womb of the room,
the only light is that which
the fading sun left
peeping through the blades
of crack shades

as overhead came a rumbling
as if a cosmic train
was rolling along celestial tracks…

For a moment, all is quiet;
yet, like buttocks, foliage
of young trees
continued their African-like
swaying…wow…

Then suddenly…on beat…everything
stops, and all that’s heard
is the beating of an old aroused heart:

House lights come back on;
the sun peeps back out,  
and the TV screen is flooded
with a rolling Weather Alert…

Followed by reports
of another mass shooting
and Taurus droppings from the POTUS.

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Charles2 says:

Another ...outstanding write ...a classic observation of nature, punctuated by the current state of the disunion ...from the reigning bull dropper

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mlowe5 says:

Thanks Charles2. In the midst of all this beauty, here comes the bull dropper reminding us that he's still here...as if it was not evident. The state of disunion continues...Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Mingoao says:

Loved the imagery of this one - Especially the quick wit reference of "Taurus Droppings" as a kinder way of saying "BS" - Quite clever, you. ! -Much Peace

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mlowe5 says:

I am honored, Mingoao, that this write resonated with you. Thank you. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.

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