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God, Nature and Tribulations (Buccaneering Dorian)

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Like wild buccaneers

on a partying raid,

they came ashore.

Fierce waters and winds

wielding their destructive swords

 grabbing defenseless trees by the necks:

viciously shaking their hair-like foliage heads;

bending their backs; snatching them up

and throwing them here and there.

 

With torrential forces,

the marauding buccaneering

waters and winds leveled mortared

and boarded constructions

as if they were thatched huts of shade.

Young and old beings

became like unripe and ripened fruits

consumed by the ravaging forces of nature.

Behind, lay skeletal fields and sandy shores

laden with rampaged debris.

 

Satisfied with the fun and booty,

the buccaneering twins

return to their seafaring sails

in search of more up roaring.

Meanwhile, the prodigal Sun returns,

reflecting dry salty tears

pasted on the faces of those

who must now iron out their wrinkled lives.

In the aftermath, Nature makes no apologies

and God can’t be cursed. 

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love_supreme says:

Loved it!

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Charles2 says:

Nature... takes no prisoners...
 

mrmelody7 says:

Very lively very powerful such is the Creator Man you aint got nothin to compare

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2b2b2 says:

WOW....Awesome Capture....Bravo!!
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks 2b2b2 for your continuing suppport and inspiration. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

Thank you mrmelody7. Your inspiring feedback continues to be an inspiration. God Bless. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mlowe5 says:

love_supreme, I am pleased you loved this piece. Thanks for your read and feedback. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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