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Break up letter

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Love and war, that was the soundtrack to that beautiful disaster that we call us and I must admit that song was so cold. Although, I would have gave it to you willingly so you wouldn't have to waste that energy, my heart was something that you stole. So much more of a woman then just that, so I'd Love you through my soul. How could someone so broken attract someone more broken and come together to make something so whole, but I guess this was that not so happily ever after, after the fairytale... I offered myself to walk with you through your personal hells, begging you to hold on but to tighten that grip my guess is that you had to let me slip and now I gotta treat it like life goes on. Before we became us I was heartless and you were guarded, all signs read proceed with caution but I rushed in regardless to break those walls down Stone by stone so what were walls made for protection are now called home. It wasn't love at first sight, so I must have looked twice and even when everything wasn't alright I still never left you. I dreamed we would create something special, chasing a man who wasn't ready to be caught but I thought I'd eventually catch you.. My eyes undress you, my hands carress you, my arms protect you, my stomach digest you, my feet ran to your rescue. I was your biggest fan, your most constructive critic and I found purpose standing next to this man. Although you would never comprehend the steps I had to take us to ensure that you could stand. And the deaths I'd die just for you to have a chance at life, but forever was never in your plan. You convinced yourself of all that I couldn't be that you never took time to reassure yourself of everything I already am. You wanted fantasy, and I was reality. A life filled with tradgedy, faith is what it had to be cause when I saw my little girl whisper in your ear, sayin i wish you was my daddy, that's what had me. So from that point on I looked to you for that responsibility gladly so when ever you pushed me away those words always grabbed me. This portrait could be portrayed as something that was painful, I just couldnt bring myself to paint you as anything less then my angel. So instead of this time me saying "*** you" I'll just say "thank you"

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love_supreme says:

Very nice!

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