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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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an old women appeared in a vision
I never seen her before don't know
if she had a key or how she got through
the door she was wrinkled in crooked
lines from time I could tell from her
clothes it was a long time ago
she took a seat poured some tea
and she never spoke a word to me
did she know it was me who made
that pot just for me wasn't expecting
company especially from a stranger
It didn't feel uneasy as if I were in
danger I believe I could take her
if she tried to subdue me
why are you here speaking
loudly with my eyes she
reached for the honey adding
a large portion to her cup
"hey that stuff cost money"
I thought to myself didn't
buy it to share with anyone else
but anyway help your self
she sipped slowly like a queen
with her pinky out while
I sat figuring out how to
get her out of my house
suddenly it dawned on me
I may have been in hers

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Powerful introspective imaging. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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