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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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all of my childhood

offenders are gone

who am I not to forgive

the dead who am I to

spit on a tombstones

actually I did one time

when I was all alone

thinking I was grown

knowing all the time

I was wrong like a

lazy caterpillar I

refused to be strong

change was wrong

couldn't tell me nothing

like a prizefighter

in a bout every time

I got knocked out

had to live with hurt

like a plant in dirt

had to grow up

from being ruthless

and corrupt through

therapy sessions

learned some lessons

finally profoundly

figured out how to

make it work for me

 

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love_supreme says:

Wow, still killing it.
 

Bragee says:

making life work for you despite all odds...a life skill we all need
 

jcf108 says:

like a plant in dirt had to grow up - love it!!!
 

LP45 says:

A powerful truth. Great write Wize. Thanks for sharing. Good to see you back!
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Charles2 says:

Vantage...

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