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Rain Closed Eyes Lazy Boy Relaxin

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Oh how I love the jubilent

sound of rain

The Rain song I can listen

to over and over again

just this symphony of harmony

so massagalistic to the brain

to the soul to the spirit

how I just love it

Closed eyes

behind those closed eye lids

one seems to to become one

with the Universe

just a relaxed soul among

the stars and darken sky

Legs stretched out feet crossed

eyes closed as I quietly sit

in the Lazy boy

Turned off all other sounds TV lights phone

as this liqidation of surround sound

pound the ground

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LP45 says:

I agree! Nothing like the relaxing sound of the rain. Great write mrmelody7. Thanks for sharing.
 

Elvan says:

mrmelody7 this is quite inspirational as you guide us through a journey of relaxation and emotional wonder. Well done.

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much Ladypoet45 been so hot we got a surprise rain last night lasted bout 3 hours SMILE HAPPY I did
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Sir love me some rain for years when I was working when I filed my taxes for occupation I always put Professional Relaxer or Freelance Traveler

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mlowe5 says:

You nailed it mrmelody7! Thanks for the relaxing sound imagery. Indee, the sounds of rain can be such a beautiful"massagalistic" experience---aymphony of peace. Thanks for sharing this echhoing write. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank You mlowe5 I perks up when I hear raindrops hit the galvanize steel sun room roof
 

Dolisha DeVonne says:

I LOVE HOW RELATABLE THIS POEM IS FOR ME. YOUR IMAGERY REALLY TAKES ME THERE. NICE WORK

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much for me rain is very refreshin and soothin one of the joys and treasures of life anyway for me it is

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