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Twine Flame

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first love

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If you’re not a powerful swimmer, then you can’t help a person about to drown

They panic and now, their weight starts to bring you down

You want to save them without a doubt

Because somewhere inside; some good can come out

But they won’t listen and keep moving around 

now the both of you are about to drown

Fear and emotions are weighing down

Going deeper no sight or sound

Now you’re the blame

Because you can’t house break a mutt thats untamed 

It’s was all good for the fortune and the fame

Now your pride turns to pain

A playa got tricked out the game

Respect humiliation, don’t be shame

Plus to be honest, your heart will never be the same 

I’m a be single, *** a relationship 

For life I came equipped 

So I’m a play my hands, no strange equip 

This just the hand I was dealt

What’s wrong with me trying to figure out what he did

All I know is I’m ***ed up bout the kidd 

My Adam, where I received my rib

I didn’t see it coming but my soul did

Fate and prayer said it’s your time, you win

You solved the puzzle now your happily ever after begins

 

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Dolisha DeVonne says:

I felt this, for real! Great flow and imagery. Thanks for sharing
 

Tali says:

Great imagery!
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, a write full of an imaging message. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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OneWing33 says:

Thank you everyone

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