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That Frigid Slap In The Face

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Liken that cold nip

on the face

Nice crisp Winter feel

like day

Gusty winds as I sit in

my truck (at The lake) come

through the open windows

with that frigid slap

take that.

The sound of the gushy white

cap rollin waves

captivate my senses

Just that nice frigid slap

in the face Winter gettin

near

Them sexy trees thowin

off the leaves

them sexy limbs reveal

yes indeed that frigid slap

is for real

Winter close thats the deal

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mlowe5 says:

A beautiful sensory pen. Great imagery. Felt that frigid slap to the face as my eyes caressed those sexy trees. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much my time of year late gettin my fire barrel know that you are a lover of them sexy trees too

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mlowe5 says:

One! Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

LP45 says:

Great write mrmelody7, Definitely on point with this one. I like everyone else has felt that slap more than once. I don't care too much for the cold weather, but it's okay sometimes. Thanks for sharing. Peace.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Ladypoet45 yeah gets cold in northeast I like brisk walks n the cold like shovelin snow too what they call cold in SC is nothin compared
 

DOLISHA DEVONNE says:

YOU ARE DEFINITELY ON POINT WHEN DESCRIBING THIS WINTER, IT REALLY HAS BEEN A SLAP TO THE FACE. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Dolisha I must say your poetry is always on point
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Dolisha I must say your poetry is always on point

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