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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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all light not good
all darkness not bad
"what is good, what is bad"
what warrants one to judge
what make one opposed to love
what is the purpose of blood
if we don't bleed out
attempting to "GET OUT"
what is being free now
beside our self 
who is inside us
emotional reaction
to a fatal attraction
past experience
pass interference
blocking the goal
up ahead up the road
escaping my evil opacity
the dark side of my mind
trying to think for me
voices in my head 
should I be listening
or should I turn the volume 
down on the sound of
of a wounded child
why can't I make a smile
without it being uncomfortable
outside the bubble 
signs of trouble inside the bubble
no one escapes no ones safe
"WE'RE ALL IN TROUBLE"

 

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mlowe5 says:

Very insightful, my Poet Wize. Sometimes we may experience confusion in where we have been. Realizing that "we're all in troublle" is the wakke-up call to the realization that we must always be aware of where we're going. The "bubble" must not become a shackle.; it must burst and we must be smilingly ready. Continue to pen your profound "weak ups", my Brother. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
 

LEEPAUL says:

That's real heavy.

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