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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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wanna live how I wanna live
wanna go where I wanna go
wanna do what I wanna do
wish I could but I can't
not that won't but I ain't
it's hard sometimes to think
smelling paint feeling faint
kinda woozy feeling dizzy
eyes burn seeing fire
destroying empires 
they'll be no buyers
no stores no hires
bout to fall off the wire
if it were any higher 
thought freedom came
when we grow go to show
been quite delusional
institutional mindset
never reminded to 
make a bed two steps ahead
three if I jog ten if I run
from a dog off a leash
I come in peace
I go in disbelief 

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Reading your work is like watchin the great Ali them piston like jabs them piston like liners with a sting and then a heavy punch fun to read your work
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

Poet Wize, I am reminded of the words of Sister Maya Angelou, "...but they will never forget how you made them feel..." I will never forget how you made me feel several years ago! And I still get that feeling with each of your writes. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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