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Away

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long distance

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For so long I've been away,

My family, I couldn't see every day,

I must move on but can I remain strong,

From my cell, I thought about the aspiration I have lost,

Trying to earn it all back at any cost, 

The way we got treated away from our families we turned to each other, 

Unrelated folks, I had to call brothers

Your blood will turn on you,

They cut you off without a second thought,

You reach out to them and they don't reply make it seem like it's your fault,

Try to make you down yourself and put you in a trap of loss,

I've been away my soul in a sorrowful place,

Open your eyes because at one point we've all been away

 

 

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Charles2 says:

in the system of ways... without the means, trying to make us slaves ...to the walls, handcuffs and flashing lights ...to steal away our dreams...
 

Starr says:

Doing bids will reveal so much within those walls and outside of them. Good write poet.

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