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Julius170
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What you want to know I like you, I feel like we would vibe together, Maybe that’s just me, What Can I say, I’m a mix kid, Who made it out the hood, I’m just trying to do something with my life, So I decided to go to college, I wanna become a detective in homicide, I also wanna be a math teacher, So idk, Back to being a mix kid, I’m Puerto Rican and Africa America, I’m 5’8, Living everyday with a smile on my face, I hope that’s good enough, I’m a deep soul, You will soon realize, I can keep going but I’ll give you a break.

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the pain in my heart

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I’m stretching out my hands
Just to get denied in the end
I’m stretching stretching out my hands 
Carrying my heart in my pocket 
Protecting myself from this deadly pain
That I’m feeling deep down inside 
patting my chest I think there’s something missing
I still got my heart
Just in a different location

I’m stretching out my hands 
Just to get denied in the end 
My soul is in so much pain
I been talking to my spirit lately 
Broadcasting my feelings 
So I seat down and I listen 
What do you gotta say
Go head I’m listening 

I think someone is speechless 

 

I’m raising my hands 

Thinking I could leave everything to faith

My believe is pretty strong

So I got on my knees 

And I prayed 

Bring my hands together 

Saying my little prayers 

 

Dear god

 

Please please come get me

I had enough in this moral realm 

My spirit is screaming 

My soul is crying 

I could feel it in my spirit 

I don’t really wanna be here

Please someone come and get me

For 23 years I been feeling endless pain 

Losing my trust 

Losing my faith in humanity 

Watching a lot of possibilities walk on by

 

Dear god 

 

I just don’t know 

What the *** to do 

It seems I just can’t 

Can’t get the only thing I been asking for

So over your

Ever since I was a kid 

Sometimes it feels like you not listening 

Answering any of my prayers 

That involves being happy

Something so simple 

Only I can’t achieve for to long

Why is that 

While I’m watching other people 

With their Head held high

I just don’t understand 

Of course I’m jealous 

Don’t we all wanna be 100 percent happy 

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

WOW! Very powerful depth

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Charles2 says:

The most important thing to see... Isn't you... Isn't me... A s, if… A seed, the first leaf to unfold... Trusting to the sun ...to come back , …as it does, each morning... Even though it stays behind the clouds ( it’s always there… don’t lose hope) Having trust, there is a way... Finding the path isn’t always easy… Back to our waiting souls ...every moment of each day, With every heartbeat that you take ...say a prayer... Ask...

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Charles2 says:

its not easy to put your feelings out... to expose ourselves to further questioning ...possibly ridicule. It opens our wounds deeper... sometimes, opens ourselves to an awareness of greater sensitivity ...sometimes opens our minds ...to greater strengths

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Tali says:

Heartbreak is a mysterious pain, have faith that this too shall pass. Do not lose your faith, let your emotions be exploited on paper and share until you feel free.

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