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Julius170
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What you want to know I like you, I feel like we would vibe together, Maybe that’s just me, What Can I say, I’m a mix kid, Who made it out the hood, I’m just trying to do something with my life, So I decided to go to college, I wanna become a detective in homicide, I also wanna be a math teacher, So idk, Back to being a mix kid, I’m Puerto Rican and Africa America, I’m 5’8, Living everyday with a smile on my face, I hope that’s good enough, I’m a deep soul, You will soon realize, I can keep going but I’ll give you a break.

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That feeling you deserve

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Forgiveness isn’t something I’m asking for,

Turning a blind eye isn’t something 

I want you to do,

Holding my hands as we walk down the street,

I remember a time where that came to be,

Forgiveness isn’t something I’m asking for,

But smile with me 

While we share the same space,

One more time 

I’m just asking to see you

As we share the same breath

It been a while

 

Forgiveness isn’t something I’m asking for,

Being open to the possible 

To the feeling of being surrounded 

By happiness 

I’m just asking 

Can I give you that feeling

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PoeticDay says:

Bro I ca relate to this poem man thank you for your words. They are very powerfull.

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Tali says:

Great feeling in this poem, words from the heart are the deepest. Great write, thanks for sharing.
 

Starr says:

Great expression of the yearning of the heart. We've all been there, on one side or the other. Good write poet.
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mlowe5 says:

Yes, Julius 170! Another profound expression of "...One love...one heart...let's get together...[again]...and feel alright...[again]..." Thanks for this profoundly beautiful share. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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