I used to sit wondering where Heaven was at
because grandpa went to heaven and didn't come back
soon after that grandma did the same too
that's when I knew Heaven had to be too good to be true
it was the only thing I had to look forward to
as time changed so did my belief
loved ones going to Heaven added to my grief
as time increased I began to see
Heaven to be just another word for deceased
The Immortal Wize
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mlowe5 says: Interesting. just as there is hell here on earth there must be some veiw of heaven whispered to us by ancestral spirits returing often to sp[irit us onward in the struggle of us who yet live here. Divine awareness is never revealed all at one moment.; yet we must continue to listen to the allegorical whispers of the ancestors to decern divine wisdom. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking write. Peace and Love, mlowe |
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