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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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A Sweeter Return

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There once was a man who had an idea So he planted a seed from that seed Grew a fruitful tree many came to that Tree to gather fruit to eat they loved the Tree that continued to yield more and More fruit to eat no one asked how the tree came to be or who planted the seed they just gathered around and took from the tree then one day the people Returned to find that  the tree had died It was a sad day so many walked away hurt and in grief missing the tree that once gave them so much fruit to eat As time passed some of the people felt bad wondering if they had found out more about the tree and who planted the seed maybe they could have done something more supportive to sustain the tree than just showing up to eat fruit from the tree

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mlowe5 says:

Another great write, Poet Wize; particularly the last stanza! As I have said before, thought is one thing, putting those thoughts into action is another. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
 

Tali says:

Wonderful write, perfect question, this is my burning question constantly we MUST water the seeds, not just eat from them.

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