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Bellyache

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I told him 

That he could 

Have a taste.

He cleaned the plate

Then,

Got back in line

For seconds. 

Showed no discretion.

Made his advances 

Out in the open.

Left me soaking

After he ripped my clouds

From the sky. 

He took it upon himself

To be a star

That I could not hide. 

He shone

Without being wished upon.

And when neither of our dreams

Came true,

He cursed my entire existence 

For giving hope

And then,

Resisting. 

But,

I was only resisting 

Being devoured. 

Never thought 

A piece of me

Would turn his stomach sour. 

 

Copyright 2019 by Kentrell Blanche 

 

 

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Starr says:

Great use of metaphors. I enjoyed this write very much. Keep the pen up poet.

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PoeticDay says:

This poem you really made deep keep sharing your passion.

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