who are you if no one knows you're here
no matter where you go no one knows
you're there no matter what you do no one knows it's done no matter what you say no one heard a word when you cry they want you to leave they don't even want to hear you breathe when you're wounded they wanna see you bleed who are you to complain about such disdain can you explain who are you to get knocked down over and over again and get back up again and again who are you you are the one going through who are you you are the one who is about to get your breakthrough when you do remember all the stuff you went through then smile and say thank you "Is this you" if not who are you
The Immortal Wize
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mlowe5 says: Nice write. We are only to be who we are created to be in purpose, here to please only the Creator who has missioned us. Thanks for the share, mlowe. |
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